The Sun and I

Last summer when I went to the beach...
I stood on the shore..
With the wind blowing across my face,
and sand in my shoes, galore!
And then I saw a magnificent sight,
A big red ball of fire,
Sank itself lower and lower..
Till at last it embraced the sea.....
And I was no longer me..
I was lost in the sea,
The sun, the ocean and the sky......
*__________*___________*____________*__________________*
I wrote this poem in 7th grade...so i guess by that standard its pretty good...
Signing off,
rad
2 Comments:
ohh nicee!
Till at last it embraced the sea.....
And I was no longer me..
LOVE those lines.....
Seventh huh? Maan gaye!:D
Post a Comment
<< Home